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You say you love me,
But you still miss her.
How can you truly love me,
When you heart longs for anotHER
- by silent-tears-02 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: anotHER
- Artist: silent-tears-02
- Description: and again, from my unknow friend
- Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- intoxicatingDestruction - 01/25/2009
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i love it
it may be short but hey short and to the point is fine
really long poems annoy most ppl anyway - Report As Spam
- Full Moon Eternal Snow - 01/02/2009
- man short and true man thats awesome i love the anotHER part because its like saying her
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- ohhcarol - 12/21/2008
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Ehhhhhhh
I don't really like i sorry.
But for effort 2/5 x]
( just because I don't really like it doesn't mean others won't , so don't let my opinion ruin you.)
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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You tried so hard to make this awful, to make this absolutely terrible; but oh, you failed. Guess what? I like it.
No, no, not because you wrote it that way - I read this a totally different way than you intended. Seriously, what you've got here is terrible - but too bad, I found a way to like it, so HA. - Report As Spam
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