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Who am I
Who am I without my family
Who am I without my games
Who am I without my friends
Who am I without my p.c
Who am I without You
- by The Rockstar NInja Jinx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: who am i
- Artist: The Rockstar NInja Jinx
- Description: when she left
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- demon strait outta_hell - 07/17/2008
- Your poem is jumbled up words on a page. But it also shows that you felt bland or perhaps.... like you were missing a part of yourself when you wrote this. Tho I do partially agree with the previous comments, I also find your poem full of emotion. the emotion itself, is rather... buried. I had to read it four times before i realized that. you could do better tho. 4/5
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- Xdarkness calls to meX - 07/17/2008
- eh i also agree with everyone else. You should try to go deeper into yourself try useing emotions to express yourself.
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- Crystalinemoon - 07/16/2008
- I agree with everyone else...Im sorry. You should try going a little deeper within yourself I shouldn't be able to see the bottom of your mind-pool like seeing a quarter through a shallow puddle.
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- Ryan Russell - 07/16/2008
- um...even with all those things, you don't amount to anything unless you also have purpose to your existence. I'd like to see a poem on <i>THAT<i> subject.
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- Kateryna of Kyiv - 07/16/2008
- Sounds like a shallow existence to me
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- Exxii_Chem - 07/16/2008
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i really think this poem expresses something boo yah 1st comment
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