Cloud Envy

• Artist: small kid_21054
• Description: Why I envy the clouds and how i wonder if the clouds envy us
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• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: cloudenvy

Here I lay on the ground,
Looking at the puffy white clouds,
How i envy their pure white innocence.
Nothing stops them from their silent voyage.
Here I lay on the ground,
Envying the clouds up high.
The way I lay and stare makes me wonder.
Do they want to sit right by and stare?
Do they long to touch the grass?
Do they feel like they are looking through glass,
Never knowing what it's like on the other side of the glass but always seeing others having fun.

Comments

[P0iS0NxGAARA]

Some one let Shikamaru read that please.Its good

[Damninals]

thats a interseting poem. i diddn't know that u were a good poet

[The Sharpie Prototype]

I love clouds too and always wanted to be one (hehe) so I totally know what you're saying in this poem.

[Fall Asleep in Paris]

It's good. The last line could be reworked a little more to keep with the flow of the rest of the poem. 4.

[Tam Loves You]

Ummm .....
Very artistic (?)
4/5

[Play Cloths]

first!