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Dreams are the life
of every man that lived,
For they open the doors
That would otherwise remain closed.
They carry our minds
And let us see that which cannot be seen
With mortal eyes that hold no dreams.
And who but ourselves
Can deny us the chance to fly?
- Title: Dream
- Artist: Cryysis
- Description: Class assignment I was proud of and kept.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: dreams mind life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- x_Konfuzion - 07/17/2008
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Nice. I love when you blend the words into another scheme in this poem. I agree with Poison about not very much to say. But it just amazing when you say those words in my mind right now.
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- The God Bot 4000 - 07/17/2008
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This is great. =]
It makes you think, and it says enough, but not too much.
It's amazing.
5/5
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- xXx_Split Mind_xXx - 07/17/2008
- very creative :3
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