Drowning Tears

• Artist: Ninja Disco Frog
• Description: This is my 1st post ^^ I wrote this last year when me and a friend of mine was going through alot. I kinda saw their situatuion and saw how my problems weren't really that bad and how i wanted to help. Please comment! Any kind of criticism is accepted but dont go crazy lol
• Date: 07/17/2008
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¤Drowning Tears¤


Drowing
Crying Inside
Tell us how you feel
Don't hold it in
Or despair will win
And dysphoria will begin
We love you so
Tell us why
Why you cry inside
Because if the tears stay in
We'll worry when
The tears will drown you
Please talk to me
I'm constantly worrying
Whats wrong
Your sad song
Your suffering
Will it end
The tears come back
And now i'm crying too
Please don't hold it in
Or despair will win
but....
If you contuinue then
I'll drown in them
with you

Comments

[P00R L3N0]

I can relate.
Beautifully written.

[Neosaki]

wow, i can't write like that, its awesome!

[death on dark wings]

I'm already crazy thank you razz and it's a sweet poem i can understand were your coming from it's a good poem