Where You Found Me

• Artist: Maginus
• Description: Something I wrote a long time ago dude. lol It was when i was super dee duper sad. Felling lonely. You should read it and junk. Its a bit hard to make it flow perfectly. Its the way I read it. I should totally record it or something because liek itll just sound all junky dude ya know? lol. well here ya go.
  
  OMFG gaia is such a hater site! it wont accept my tags! what jerk butts!
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: alone

I needed you, but you weren't there
You didn't even think to care
You say "Whatever," while you ignore
that I'm crying on the bathroom floor

You're all I have. Without a doubt,
you're what my whole life's about
Then why is it that I should defend,
my feelings from my only friend?

So it goes, you will offend me
Make me hurt, when you should mend me
But I'll forgive you by your next call
The only time I'm happy at all

Comments

[dAnCiNg_PrInCess96]

i'd give it 6/10 because it';s good but a little to short to understand

[XxInnocent-FearxX]

Its very emotional....4/5 3nodding

[CrayonDoodles]

Well...


The poem is good and all but you try to make the words rhyme clearly. And that's not such a good thing. But overall, 7/10 3nodding 3

[Nightmare Zodiac]

its really good