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Me:
Outcast
Freinds:
outcast
never been loved
but have loved our whole life
ignored
teased
me
hated
freinds
liked
I stand alone
as an outcast'
empty
and alone
- by harvester_of_darkness |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Among Outcasts
- Artist: harvester_of_darkness
- Description: Something i thought of while i was talking to my crush on msn! (( no i do not studder))
- Date: 07/20/2008
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- harvester_of_darkness - 07/24/2008
- o srry mistype
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- METRO SKiiES - 07/23/2008
- Watch for spelling and grammar! The poem would look a lot better with captalization and punctuation. Great ideas though, the word choice would be improved, and I think this is really good with a little improvement. Great theme, I have felt that way for the past five or six years, I've been labeled as the weird, hyper, crazy, stupid girl in junior high and I really can't wait to get to high school... if I can survive my last junior high year. We've all just got to pull through...
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- ChristOurSavior-LovesUs - 07/20/2008
- You did mispell friends but I wont lower the rating because of it. But really it is really only words so 4/5 is my rating
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