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The night sky sparkles,
With its evil revealing light,
Never showing a tomorrow,
It binds our souls to the stars,
I am falling from the heavens,
From a falling star,
Black wings shimmer,
With a pearl essence red,
A little girl stares,
With amazement and bewilderment,
All I can do is smile,
And I hit the ground,
The blood that should trinkle from my mouth,
Not a trace was found,
I am the one of your dreams,
The one winged angel of death,
Here to steal your soul,
and bring it to peace at last
- by Fallen Angels Kiss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: Fallen Angel
- Artist: Fallen Angels Kiss
- Description: A little poem that is getting published in Immortal Verses....So I figured why not submit it.
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: fallenangel
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ChibiLovett - 08/14/2009
- Wow that is really good.
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- Z E T H I E K A - 01/02/2009
- very... nice! you are really talented.... it actually paints an image in my mind as I read it... XD
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- Nikki4815 - 12/14/2008
- Very nice. I actually have a poem with the same name, which is why I stopped to read this one. PM me if you want to hear it. I personally think it's very good, but I love yours too. And, as stated in the comment below me, it should be seperated into stanzas. A lot of gaians don't like to read a lot, and short stanzas make it easier to read, so people don't skip reading this altogether--but if they do that, they sure are missing out!
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- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
- This is interesting. It's got some imagery, which is good, but I think it needs more of it. I also think this should be seperated into stanzas. Three stars for the reasons stated above.
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