A Collection

• Artist: Barmy Bunny
• Description: 3 haikus, which were written at different times and with very different subjects
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: haiku

1) This was the first haiku I ever attempted, it isn't very good. Guess the subject biggrin

Powerful hindlegs,
Delicate front; letting you
jump, canter and buck.

2) This one is my most recent haiku, and was written when I was feeling sad. You can tell.

Words which freedom give
to this long forgotten soul,
my reason to live

3) This is personally my favourite of the three, and I wrote it to fit into a story I was writing. The story also worked quite well.

A forbidden Love,
Youth’s grand trap and greatest joy,
Causes the most pain.

Comments

[Beautifully Broken Smile]

I was never a fan of haikus, but very well done =3

[Atheshya]

All of the syllables are right, which is good. My only problem with any of these is the rhyme in the second one - haiku aren't generally supposed to have rhymes.
My favourite is probobly the first one - I like how it describes a horse.

[shockcollar]

good poems u made sure to have to correct amount of syllables to =D