Roses and Raven In Fire

• Artist: Arkhangel Hamatiel Zuriel
• Description: the tale of the love and hate between a rose and a raven
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: raven rose fire love

Blood and thorns in a fiery splash
Everything seems out of place,
but its really all toghter.
Love and hate, both seem different,
but really the same.
Feathers and Petals dancing together
in heat and love.
both really hating each other to the end.
nither telling the other there true feeling.
However theire fates are link toghter by the fates them selfs

The Raven rested it weary body on his lovely rose.
Lightin hit and fire erupted, unabel to fly away,
traped by the rose's thorns they both burned alive.
both the rose and the raven
both loved each other
both hated each other.
now both are dead.

Now where the rose and the raven died a singel plant grew.
stanied by the blood of the raven, it grew into the most beautiful rose ever.
Till it was plucked and weathered away.

Comments

[TrueExile]

Well I think that if she simply fixed up her words it would all make dince and be a very beautiful poem! >.< keep writing gurl! 5/5

[Arkhangel Hamatiel Zuriel]

thanks!
i rushed it alot, i now.

[Atheshya]

This tries. Really, it does, and you ARE on the right track. But unfortunately, this doesn't quite have as much imagery as it should, and some of the lines are a little awkward ('However theire fates are link toghter by the fates them selfs'). Also, there are lots of spelling and grammer errors - I suggust you get a proofreader (do you have a parent or older sibling that's good at spelling and grammer?).