Dreamest

• Artist: Sterekorgtfo
• Description: Description: This is a poem i wrote umm idk how i did but just comment me and tell me what u think
  
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: dream future stars

Dreamest

Gazing at the stars,
intimidating me on what planets shall become.

Only in my mind,
should i know what would portray,
in all endless galaxies.

There are only a few lifes,
that are able to unlock the portal of the unseen...

Comments

[Atheshya]

This looks like it's going somewhere. You should write more of this, definately - while I like what you have, it's too short for me to give any rating higher than three stars.