Congratulations

• Artist: monnarck
• Description: This is written because of the things we learn when we are little (such as stereotypes, prejudices, hating, etc....). Yes we are born selfish and we all said "mine" but we learned to hate from others (parents, friends, etc...parents.....)---at least that is what i think....
  this is kinda grim...
• Date: 07/24/2008
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From observations we seem to learn
and through fellings and thoughts we all burn
i see someone with rage in their eyes
i can tell their heart seeths with dispise
as they fall to thier firey fate
congratulations, i just learned how to hate
two people beat one another
i can tell they hate each other
one of them knocks the other out of their path
congratulations, i just learned about wrath
dirty tricks of hate and deceit
they lie in fron of the devils feet
this terrible act runs through the people
congratulations, i just learned about evil
a baby is born with innocence and love
things that always come from above
but seeing the acts satan will sell
someday this baby might be burning in hell.....
congratulations, i have told all i must tell......

Comments

[inking the world]

I have never thought of it like that but i think your right. Nicely done. I like it

[Pinuyu]

one of my favorites.

[- MrSuperRawr]

cool poem and i see wat u mean

[Andromeda Naiad]

It makes a lot of really good points.
I understand what you mean.
It is well written too.

[iluvpolkadots]

Its very...nice. Its got a lot of good points. I like it, even if it does seem a bit on the darker side...