Multicolored Pen

• Artist: La Cerise Noire
• Description: Something I did while in class. I was copying notes, when I noticed that my pen was really pretty.........
• Date: 07/24/2008
• Tags: rainbow

So fascinating, I'm staring at my pen
The one thats multicolored,
Wrapped up in my rainbow thread . . .

I'm staring at it harder, I'm holding it tighter,
Even though it's just a pen,
I still treasure it, my multicolored pen,
Simply because it's mine.

Like I treasure all that I own,
In fear of it being taken away from me.
Like most of what I used to own
Till they were taken away from me,

And hard as I tried, my favorite,
Multicolored pen, will one day,
Someday, be taken away from me.

Just like most of what I own.

Comments

[ThA AzN DeViL]

Somehow this is hard to critic for me... i'd have to say 4/5, the last line doesnt cut it for me sorry. could have a bigger bang.

[Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels]

...I ******** love this.
Wow. First time I've been speechless,
hun that's a great thing.
How you can look at a pen and treasure it,
but know that it will one day fade away- like all
that ever meant something to you. Like friends, and family.
People that you love- things that you love.
Of what you use to own.
And you know it from the start- But it makes it so much more
painful to keep moving- but treasure it while it still lasts- even if it ends. 50000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5 T^T

[selene_queen_of_a_lost]

kewl i wish i have a pretty pen darn LOL!!!