Spring.

• Artist: inowa123
• Description: A poem about spring written a long time ago. It may be short but it took awhile in order for me to get all the words down. Enjoy. Critique. Whatever.
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: spring beginning warmth

Spring is the beginning of life
When all anxiety and strife
Commence to melt away
Along with the ivory snow
For everlasting days.
The instigation of glee
Its touch of warmth begins to sow
To everybody.[/size

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Comments

[jorscovi]

pretty good. somehow, there seems to be too much rhyming. that's not exactly a bad thing.

[inowa123]

Oh no! I screwed up the size thingy without even noticing. D: Grrr.