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It seems like everyday is the same,
For now I know your to blame,
You stole my heart,
And watched my fall apart.
I tried to stand up to you,
But you beat me until I was black and blue,
I took the courage to run away,
It feels like my broken heart is here to stay.
Everyone says it will heal,
Now it feels like our love was'nt real,
Each day feels like forever,
It has to heal now or never.
By Emma smile
- by indigo-goldx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/06/2008 |
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- Title: A poem About A Broken Heart
- Artist: indigo-goldx
- Description: A poem about A Broken heart and a girl that was abused by her boyfriend.
- Date: 08/06/2008
- Tags: love brokenheart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yuli Saikari - 03/20/2009
- <33 very nice i like it!
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- unlovedtreehugger - 01/05/2009
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Constructive criticism:
I really liked this,
but,
don't really worry too much about rhyming words. Rhyming doesn't matter.
Focus on the flow of the poem, so when it comes out, it sounds beautifully when spoken aloud.
I say, 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Black_Princess_Pink_love - 09/13/2008
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its really good i love it!
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- indigo-goldx - 08/11/2008
- Please?
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- indigo-goldx - 08/07/2008
- Please comment on my poem !
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