**when ur near**

• Artist: funky_fresh_13XD
• Description: its sumthin i wrote to my boy friend who i love day after day!
• Date: 08/09/2008
• Tags: love passion

when ur near,
no mountains too far.
but when ur away,
the sky has no stars.

when ur near,
the sun shines so bright!
but when ur away,
even day seems like night.

when ur near,
my heart starts to flutter.
but when ur away,
i feel clumsier than butter.

i like you,
i love you,
i think of u day by day.

i love u most when u are near,
and miss u when ur away.




thank u. smile

Comments

[Insane The Idiot]

great job, i can feel the emotion radiating off of every word as you say it aloud. 5/5

[Phinagin2000]

it's so good (no wonder u have 3 poems in the "spot light" right now at once smile ) it flows so gracefully, i lurves it too

[frofirth88]

I really like it and I can feel the passion in the poem great job