scilent death

• Artist: Sings_to_the_moon
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• Date: 08/11/2008
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i lay silent under the ground
i speak not a word and hear not a sound
all of the things i used to adore
are silent in a heart that beats no more

Comments

[Angry Strawberry_Lust]

strangely haunting
i like it
5/5

[calvin-hyuga]

i dissagrre with the person who wanted it longer, my poems are short- about a page but they are strong

[Lady Erudessa]

I like. ^.^

[Larrful]

It was good, but I think you could of put more emotion into it by making it a little longer