- A small town girl. She's in this big world. She has no idea of wut is to come. She is alone, she is scared, she has no one to go to. she is scared cuz no one is there to guide her on her long journey. But is she really alone. I say no cuz u r never alone in life the is someone around every coner waiting 4 u to make ur move. Now if u chose to no keep moving forward then u chose to live the long life that is ahead of u. But only u can make it. everyone else has a different choose to make. even if it as small as smoking with ur friends or skipin class. It's ur chose u make and it's ok if u get scared cuz we all r when we have to make a chose it may seem so small to some of u but it a life changer to us all cuz one chose can change ur whole life in a (blink) of an eye. so think about ur life and think about wut ur life will be like if u chose one or the other, think about witch one is the right one 4 u not wut ur parents or friends say u chose to in the long run so u pick the one u think is best to u and if u need help u can ask anyone they will tell u how there pick change their life but we all have to chose someday in r life. we all get scared we may not show it or tell u but we all do. so before u skip class or smoke think about wut it could do to u in the long run cuz u might think oh onnce wont hurt but it really can maybe not now but it will. A life is a short time but when u make a chose that may be the right one it seems like it last 4ever. thats why ur parents say (it seems just like yesturday...) cuz like is short.But the great times u have last 4ever but the wrong chose can last 4ever too. Be the best make the pick that is right to u and if u need help ask. life is a journey but the key is to make the best of it. dont be scared to ask ?'s they make it the pick easy enjoy life dont fear it. I love my life cuz i wont to see wut it holds. Why do u live?
- Title: Life
- Artist: Jadeakins
- Description: all about life
- Date: 09/01/2008
- Tags: life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Bunnochist - 12/19/2008
- Um..it's a little hard to read with it all jumbled up like this, I thought it was a story. And the random brackets and shorthand really take away from it too, it's hard to conjure it up in your head that way. Maybe edit it and re-submit it?
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- Hm, this was hard to read, and did not capture my interest. It needs a lot of work(especially in grammar, word choice, imagery, and pacing)1.25/5.
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