Lifeless Love

• Artist: badboinbadgirl
• Description: This is my first time submitting a poem in Gaia, so please be fair on your ratings and comments. Though I do have experience with poetry for several years and have submitted many in contests and books, it is still new for me here. This poem is about people/person who cheat(ed) on their spouse or gf/bf and is sometimes left with regret, guilt, and/or shame.
• Date: 09/07/2008
• Tags: lifeless love

As I look into the eyes looking at me, I see a lifeless love within that wants to be set free.
A dullness that carries on, the shadows are my con.
To be set free is what I want, this lifeless love that is my haunt.
I run away from it to be sucked back in, I guess that's what I get for my loathesome sin.
I need someone to help me until it releases, the lifeless love that shattered their heart into pieces.
I've lived with it so long, it tears me apart 'cause I know I was wrong.
Lifeless love please be gone, so I can regain my endless bond.
'Til that day comes I will abhor; I want to feel the endless amor.

Comments

[Inu_Fangirl]

I like it very much.. The picture doesn't completely match, but it's cute. If you have a dA, you should add me so that I can look at more of your poems. http://paintmethesunrise.deviantart.com/

[Lord Bubbleygirl]

good job

[XXCrack_TokaneXX]

I really thought it was sweet, and very good 5/5

[Kikyo Demon of Fire]

How sweet. Its a very nice poem 5/5.

[prbadboi]

its gud. 5/5

[Ninja sasuke5050]

pretty good its a three

[Evilmonkies1]

Good poem nice 5/5