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knows! for me ...
earned born,
then grow,
try to listen and understand,
able to sleep and wake.
but what of all this worth
was more you know ... my love
and also earned power
love the way that i love you ...
so I can say,
always be your ... whee
- by Garoto brasileiro |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/08/2008 |
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- Title: A man in love...
- Artist: Garoto brasileiro
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- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 09/23/2008
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Total suck.
No point, and if you ever put an emoticon in your poem again I will come to your house and punch you in the face. - Report As Spam
- Delio_Brasil - 09/11/2008
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gostei...
belo jogo de palavras... - Report As Spam
- Angry Ninja Cloud - 09/11/2008
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gostei... muito criativo...
lógico q eu tive q traduzir
+ é um bom poema... - Report As Spam
- Loly Brasil - 09/11/2008
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é um bom verso...
valeria + se vc tivesse escrito
em portugues... - Report As Spam
- infinite_personalities101 - 09/09/2008
- I get where your going with this, but a litlle more detail, and some imagry words and this would make a great poem! 3/5!
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- different333 - 09/08/2008
- ... odd. nice attempt though. Try reading some others poems and seeking inspiration from them.
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- Frosted Cookii3 - 09/08/2008
- ... huh?
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