Unknown Saver

• Artist: EdwardC88
• Description: This poem that wrote like a year ago. This poem can be about that someone that loves always sees you or about God and how he wants us to know him and love him.
  
  
  
  
  
• Date: 09/08/2008
• Tags: unknown saver

As I watch you,
You are totally oblivious
to my existance
Each day, you do
average things without
the thought of my eyes
on you.
You never gave
a second thought
of light footsteps behind
you
Timind squeaks
at your door
Tiny voices exchanged
in the air
But it was I that was upon you
You brush off the doubt
but deep inside youself
you know of me,
Just look closely and
I will appear to you.
Hold out your hand
and I shall hold out mine
Let me me hold you and fly
out of this
destestable world.
Trust in me friend
and slavation I will
hand you.
Do not reject me
for I hold your beginnings
in my hands
and
trust deep in my
heart
I glaze upon your innocence
hoping that we may
one day we may
know each other well
and
never again fret from each others
comapny.

Comments

[Jeyrin]

I like it! 4/5.

[the_ashen_child]

that's really interesting, i think the metifor for how gods always there, we just need to look is really good