Wish on Me

• Artist: xSoela
• Description: It's funny, but the times when I seem to find it easiest to write poetry is at night when I feel all peaceful and sleepy. I just write a line or two and start cranking out the rest! Feel free to comment ^-^
• Date: 09/14/2008
• Tags: wish

I never understood why you would wish upon a star.
Surely it can't hear you from so very, very far?

Surely it can't help you from so very, very high?
I feel that those who wish on stars are living out a lie.

A star has no emotions, it just twinkles over the land.
Why should it be there if you should need a helping hand?

I think and care most deeply, I have and always will,
And shall be here when you need me, through times both good and ill.

So next time you feel helpless, as if you're lost at sea,
Instead of wishing on a star, why don't you wish on me?

Comments

[Only Becca]

... Wow. It's simplistic, but not simple, and sweet, but not overly so. It's one of those few poems on Gaia that actually says something. Original and well-written. 6/5

[prickyprincess_AngelNoir]

this I love.