IF I live

• Artist: truehiddenking
• Description: don't ask why
• Date: 09/17/2008
• Tags: live

IF I LIVE? -Written by THK Productions
Now I know I can’t stay
But before I leave…
Where’s my heart?
Why don’t I feel anything?
I know I’m alive
But there isn’t any pain
Why does it beat
Why am I afraid
To keep on living?
I’m not afraid to walk alone
On this earth of ours

What will happens?
If I can’t find the beat?
The beat of my heart
The pulse isn’t moving
I feel so cold
If I stay….
Will I be forgiven
How come I’m afraid
To walk this world alone?
I want my heart back
I want the pain back
Without it….there’s nothing to gain

So why am I afraid?
Just to walk alone
On this light world of ours
Is it because I can’t feel?
But why do I feel afraid?
Where is my heart, I need it
Maybe is stay I’ll be forgiven
I will die without my heart
Please I beg for it
The tool for loving
The tool for moving
Without it I can’t move
Without it, I’m just a tool

What it is the point of existence
If there’s a reason to exist?
If living is so beauty
Than why does it hurt?
If I live…will I carry on?

Comments

[Nadine 0_o]

awesome i luv it 5/5

[Zolah]

I think this was great, i enjoyed it alot :3 would be lovely as a background for a neat drawing with simillar theme. good job!

[truehiddenking]

did you not understand what the poem meant? it relates to life, but is not a poem of life, or death, and not a poem of heart. no matter how much materials are overdone, if it's used in the right manner it can be original.

[Rauko_Kokuruim]

I suggest you try working with less trite material-- if you're going to write about something as simple and overrused as death/life/heart, you've really got to make something fantastically creative or...well, not full of grammatical errors, bland imagery, and trite language.