Sudden Down

• Artist: Lady of Whimsy
• Description: A poem I wrote when I was depressed;
  Now that my hormones are all in balance, I can look back at this poem and go..."that pretty much sums it up."
• Date: 09/17/2008
• Tags: sudden down

Another sudden down:
Tripped over her own feet,
Ripped open her knees,
Bleeding for no reason.
These feelings don't belong
But the good ones are gone
And the gravity's instant,
Pulling her back over double-bent
To the floor and again.
There's no water or ice
and her laces are tied,
But she can't seem to stand
Overcome with a lead-heavy head
That she can't understand so instead she pretends
That she's falling on purpose and wants to descend.

Comments

[tksunshine93]

This is very good
Very sad
Great imagery
And sadly at the moment I can relate.........

[Petals Among]

Ewwww! XD im jk nice one! smile

[Dark Bishounen]

I've written similar pieces to that regard..
Nice work.

[bingoqueen]

thought this was a avi contest? whats this?