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Why did you leave?
Why did you cry?
Is it because there's another guy?
Who is strong?
Fast or just makes you wish it could last...?
Oh why did you have to go,
I love you even when it snowed.
My heart is now sloid ice as you leave me,
For someone you barly even know?
Does he make your heart pump fast,
As if you may fly?
Why did you go...
My heart bleeds with sarrow and pain
As I wish us to be one again.
Sleep seemed to be a thing in the past
As I think that we could have last.
Food turns to ash as I cry and plead,
Even though I knew you never loved me..
I wished you happiness and a life,
Though I know that I am on a knife.
It hurts to breath, to think or moan,
I really should just be no more.
I hate this feeling, this deadness in me,
But I know that we are no more..
Cant help but think of you even in dreams,
Though I wake up with a scream...
I miss you even when I vist you gravestone in the snow,
Why did you go on that road,
Just to see that man you didnt even know..
Why did you go...
- Title: Why did you....
- Artist: Eurwen
- Description: Its a quick poem that I wrote for my english class..I would love to hear your impression of it..Please tell me what you think.
- Date: 09/19/2008
- Tags: life death pain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- YouhGee - 09/19/2008
- u have spelling errors...
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- Aries34 - 09/19/2008
- Quiet good...
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- Devin-who-else - 09/19/2008
- just off of a quick read id say you need to use commas to add more rest spots otherwise it looks fine ive posted one of mine you can check it out if you want.
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