Can I?

• Artist: LyricalLemon
• Description: it's about love, how it feels, and rejection, how it hurts
• Date: 09/19/2008
• Tags: love rejection death

Can I ask you a favor?
Can I tell you a tale?
Can I trust you to listen,
Listen closely without fail?

Can I sing to you a lyric?
Can I write for you a song?
If it's dark, deep, provactive,
Will you think it's wrong?

Can I give you all my heart?
Can I loosen my control?
Can I bare my deepest secrets,
And trust you'll tell no soul?

Can I rise against world?
Can I fly across the sky?
Can I hold you in my arms,
And never tell you why?

Can I tell you that I love you?
Can I trust you love me back?
Can I handle your rejection,
If you say that I'm off track?

Can I cut myself to mourn you?
Can I bleed until I cry?
Can I hope you'll hold my hand,
As I lay there and slowly..

slowly...

die.

Comments

[XxEmoBlondexX]

I understand the poem and how it feels for rejection and break-ups..
Amazingly written and lovely.
biggrin
5'd

[BambiMama]

this is as awesome as your other one!!!

[Qwad]

Clear, you stated your main points well. I like the use of rhetorical questions to emphasise your points.

5/5

[Memory Earth]

Wonderful, just wonderfuly written. I liked it. It has that bit of death but it is just an amazing poem. Well done 5 stars.

[devil-assistant-666]

very well worder and how you kept thw flow smile awesome! hope you get into the finals. ttyl.

[Blankspace2]

Wow. I really like this. Kind of hit an emotional spot! It's sad, but go, I love it!

[Zarxous Zapherus]

wow thats good very good sad,you truly did a good job with this hope u do alot more this was great