the end of love

• Artist: juston14
• Description: i have writen this back in 8th grade right now im in 10th so its a lil old but its about me and my old love
• Date: 09/19/2008
• Tags: love

timeless times,
its mine and urs

i have not see
so much like u

the heavens i thought
they were missing u

i have seen u form afar
and when u see me

u see me for who i am
and not just for who i look like

but ifs there any thing u need
im just that look away

from me to
u my love

Comments

[ROSE FLIP]

ur poem is similar to one i wrote

[villaabe]

good effort, your transition from the 3rd stanza to the 4th was not too good and the 4th stanza doesn't flow... needs work but it is a good message.