Painted Stars (Remake Version)

• Artist: CelestialAwakening
• Description: One of my old ones, I had forgotten about it, not too bad. It is a double layer poem the bold words read down to make another poem.
• Date: 09/23/2008
• Tags: painted stars remake version

Silence never comforts me so much,
As when it comes through the phone.
Too afraid to say anything,
To start the silent storm,
Of tears and somber emotions
That come from two hearts , sewn together
With a thread, so strong, it must be love
And when they are torn apart,
It doesn't rip at the seamAnd they drift away.
Ignoring the large pieces,
That still stick together laying tangled on the floor
Painting a crimson sunset so beautiful,
Wishing for the summer stars,
So we can hold each other once again.
But this sun won't set
The stars aren't coming this time are they?
You said they aren't coming ever.
Will you come back,
Come back and help me paint the stars?

Comments

[CelestialAwakening]

It's a remake so I wrote the poem and finished it then I did the second layer later afterwards for another version

[kimeki-chan]

Wow it is a great poem.
I love that you put like a secret one in it.
To me that shows that you spent time on it.
Five stars