- A womens beauty is there own, they all have a certain thrown,with us at there feet,once a month there really hard to beat,stay away for this is there evil streak and they make you grow a beak,but for women everywhere we really care even when our minds seem bare just remeber we'll always be thare
- Title: A Womens Beauty
- Artist: Ripley64
- Description: this poem shows how beutiful women are to us
- Date: 09/26/2008
- Tags: womens beauty
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Comments (5 Comments)
- crazy_life247 - 05/17/2009
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i think its kind its kind of true that we have a thrown...lol...but we don't make u grow a beak...that part i got mixed up.
But i still think this is a pretty damn poem. =^_^= - Report As Spam
- fIexed - 04/02/2009
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"really hard to beat" - like, beat up?
UGH, this grammar. - Report As Spam
- Arwengirl13 - 10/21/2008
- thats really nice, minus the beak part, but whatever thats your own flavor on it
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- Hidden Shadow Love - 10/21/2008
- uh, grammar mistakes and the "beak" was weird. That's all I have to say.
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/21/2008
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"They make you grow a beak?"
What the hell? - Report As Spam
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