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In my closet
Alone, dark, silent
Here I can breath
Once afraid of what you thought of me
Not here
Upon my throne of clothes,
I look upon thee seeking,
A power only I have found
I am the king upon a throne
A towering throne of musty clothes
Thou looks unto me bewildered; and I laugh
The supreme wisdom of a psychopath
- by Vanishing Illusionist |
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- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: I Closet King
- Artist: Vanishing Illusionist
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Description:
The poem was inspired by "In the Closet" By Melody Carlson's book "I am Chole"
I actually went in my closet to inspire myself what to write about XD - Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: closet king vanishingillusionist crazy
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Aoi Usa - 10/03/2008
- awsome i love it! heart
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- Anchietae - 10/02/2008
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It's an interesting poem, I like the words you use. They're rather uncommon since humanity has now reduced itself to using basic English. Some of the words you picked give it that extra spark of reality and feeling.
But.. I must be honest, when you first start to read it.. it seems as if you're writing a poem about homosexuality. ^^;;
Anyways! I like it. I think you should add more too it. =3 - Report As Spam
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