The Devil's Wishes

• Artist: wolfgirl2009
• Description: here is my poem.
  please tell me how i did nicely
  and also please dont make fun of the fact that it is religeos
  im not trying to puch chritianity on you im only speaking the truth.
  i belive in this if you dont that is your choice
  but some choices the world makes are wrong.
  thank you
  please rate on the poem not on ur beliefs on religion
  
• Date: 10/02/2008
• Tags: devils wishes

The evil master lurks below.
Watching and waiting for the time to strike.
Sending his minions to do his dirty deeds.
Reeking havick on the innocent,
and pushing the guilty to their limits.
Screaming with rage when his plans go wrong.
He curses at the one who sent him to his dark and burning cell.
But the evil one still sits and waits for his chance to strike.
To strike and rule over all.
Those are the devil's wishes........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................these wishes will never come true for there is one and only one who can defeat him. Some day he will come when the devil has thought he has won. He will come and save us from the same fate the devil has recieved. His name is Jesus Christ.

Comments

[phoenix_lives]

I'm not really into religouse type things, but if I was I'd say this alright. It's missing a more personal view though.

[Xx_DR3AMI3_B0IxX]

lol she has no idea what shes tlkng about shes way to close minded poems dont hav to hav metaphors mine dnt biggrin i lke it personally 5/5 bcuz it makes sense but at the sme time it duznt rlly but it all cums together and knda mks lik a stry biggrin

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

There's no metaphor or really anything all that interesting in the poem. Honestly, it's "the devil is bad. Baaaaaaaaad." Yawn. Then you preach about Jesus.

If you must, use a metaphor. Like white dog versus black cat or something.