When I saw you

• Artist: Nerdy_Fox
• Description: He probably dosent know my name...T_T
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: meet

When you walked by me

you swept me off my feet
you look so evle and sweet

with your long hair
made me make a fair

you make me cry
and fly
without you i would die

i have dazzes
about your mazzes

you are my night
And i am your moon alway waching you

Comments

[mexicantacos2003]

you have potential
that last line is what kept me going throughout the whole poem.


but your getting better ibet.

[RandomGal4]

i love your poem