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Shades of gray paint the sky as dusk falls upon our bare eyes.
These walls protect my heart from the hurt of many regrets I've made
I see you creep on me from behind so cautiously hoping I won't hear
Your heavy footsteps.
Are you here my shadow to break me down to my core
You know I hide deep inside?
As the smoke surrounds my lungs I exhale my glory I behold.
What is it that others see in me that I lack to find on my own?
I look upon my reflection see nothing but bleakness and sorrows
These sorrows I find are hard to weep given this life I lead
I want you to be the last to kiss these bittersweet lips I
Wear daily.
You asked me to show my true colors well my dear it's not that easy for me
I've painted on so many layers hiding myself away from all the hurt
That may come my way promise me if I peel them off one by one
You won't break this inutile heart of mine.
All my layers are off now I feel naked and bare am I what you thought?
If not ill turn the other direction and let you move on with your
Lovely live you lead I just wish that someone will love me for me one day.
- by exitmylife08790 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2008 |
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- Title: bleh.. =
- Artist: exitmylife08790
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i dont have a title for this actually...
any advice?? o-0
i wrote this one night when i was boredd it just sorta came out i dont know if its any good but , ill see =D - Date: 10/06/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- kutie_04 - 12/20/2008
- Very good! i like it a lot!
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- Oxalis - 10/06/2008
- nice, i like it
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- xX_HarryPotterLuvr118_xX - 10/06/2008
- kool
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- Bedink - 10/06/2008
- not bad. you have rythm down pat. i also like how you don't use cliche terms and such. very professional.
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- Nori Tankaka - 10/06/2008
- wow,that's so deep.I luv that...how u wrote it.It's fantastic!
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- jojos_house_of_pancakes - 10/06/2008
- wow it shows a ton of emotion! i love it. i think you might have meant to say lovely life you lead instead of lovely live you lead. but its still great.
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