Suicidal Nightmare.

• Artist: W i l d - G a z e
• Description: Basically, this girl is completly devistated when her boyfriend broke up w/ her and she found out he never did love her. He only went out w/ her to make her feel better. She is so emotionally hurt by this that she takes her own life.
  
  I liked it, and I would like opinions from others. If u don't like it, that's not my problem.
• Date: 10/08/2008
• Tags: suicidal nightmare

Wandering in this darkness,
With a river of crimson red.
No one here to end my suffering,
Alone I am till the end.

Slowly I fall into a dark abyss,
Falling at such a fast pace.
I think of things to get me through,
the only thing I see: your face.

The love we shared ment nothing to you,
but to me, it meant more than you know.
You left me in my time of need,
And now I crash into crimson red snow.

No one's around,
No one can hear
My screams of pain,
or see my waterfall of tears.

Tonight's the end of all my pain,
My last taste of sweet air.
The knife I hold will sooth my soul,
And rid this pain I can not bare.

I blame you for this,
My eternal suffering,
You ripped my heart out of my being,
and all I feel is a nightmare of pain.
And after tonight....I will feel nothing.

Comments

[Spizzey]

W O W thats flippin awseume man i luv it O_O

[End~Moraine]

Too emo-cliche.
Just like most poetry in this arena. Sorry.

[Lets Get Deadly]

Also, I love that it's red. As if it was written in blood. Good show!

[Lets Get Deadly]

Britt-kun...WOW!

[Hekibel]

That's sad.... It makes me want to smack them both.... Really though, I have to ask, would you commit suicide if he dumped you? I've been dumped in pretty brutal ways before, but they haven't driven me that far over the brink... I suppose it's different for everyone.... *shrugs* Sorry, you got me off on a tangent..... Good poem, anyway! Very sad, very good....

[Ashley_and_3vil_forever]

i love it this shows how some desperate women act when they care for a man

[QUACK on CRACK]

I really like this poem as well. It is very depressing, I feel her pain as well. That guy is a jerk sad