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Today is your test
Yesterday,you play with your pest
Today,your hand was numb
and your dumb
You did not study
and you were not lucky
You mind was a hail
The teacher says you fail
I'm so dumb
All your hands was numb!
- Title: PoEm[So DuMb]
- Artist: mjfabian
- Description: This wat i think and i love the poem!!Pls add a comment and vote!!!Pls
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: poemso dumb
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Comments (2 Comments)
- koolkiddys123 - 10/16/2008
- its quite funny indeed... i agree with the comment below me...
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- OhDearie - 10/16/2008
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The second line seems slightly forced.
It doesn't have past tense either.
Line four is meant to be a "you're".
"All your hands was numb!" is one of the most strange sentences I've ever heard.
Work on your grammar, spelling and punctuation. - Report As Spam
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