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death poem
i hear my heart beating waiting for it to stop,
the time when all the temperature in my body is going to drop
when all the blood stops rushing through my veins
so that only the shell of myself remains
when my eyes will look but can not see
the corpse remains but is not me
when my breathing finally dies away
the time when no one can make me stay
the time when i take my final breath
then i will lie peacefully in death.
- by CrowleysGirl |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2008 |
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- Title: the significance of death
- Artist: CrowleysGirl
- Description: i wrote this when i was mad at the world.....i guess that's just how i write
- Date: 10/17/2008
- Tags: significance death
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HarajukuGirl92 - 12/09/2008
- Love it,SO sad though.But the best poems are.5/5
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- xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx - 12/08/2008
- :3 i know how you feel
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- Petty Spaghetti - 11/09/2008
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entray! entray!
i luffed it meg!!
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- scooder_1 - 11/08/2008
- best poem ever. i give you a 45 out of 4
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- Posessed Shell - 10/17/2008
- its SAD TT-TT very gud none the less though i love death.. it fasicanates me lol however you spell it, this poem... makes me feel.. like im actully dieing..
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- kokubyaku neko - 10/17/2008
- great poem... i wouldent change a thing 5/5 hope you win
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