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Beauty is the female form
And clearness of summer skies,
Gentle calm after a storm
And a loved ones soothing sighs.
Mozart at the break of dawn
The Cranberries in the night
Beauty is hatred forlorn,
And love in its sweet delight.
True beauty is forgiving
All of those you do despise,
And to carry on living,
With piety in your eyes.
- by heartbreaker soul |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2008 |
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- Title: beauty
- Artist: heartbreaker soul
- Description: this is also one that i've made..hehe..btw i'm new here..plz be my friend
- Date: 10/17/2008
- Tags: beauty
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Comments (7 Comments)
- karidosis - 10/22/2008
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one's soothing
i didn't understand it at first but rereading it makes me like it very much. it's good, in the message and in the form. it doesn't look like you were concentrating on meter, but i give you a pat on the back anyway. cuz we're cool like that. :] - Report As Spam
- A_Scared_Star - 10/21/2008
- Not bad
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- Tsuki Kurai - 10/20/2008
- Oooooh, so pretty! Theres nothing i can critique about this, except maybe to center it and ad some color! =3
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- pinkdoggie7 - 10/19/2008
- its beautiful, very smooth, and it doesnt look like you tried too hard at the rhymes
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- iBrightScales - 10/19/2008
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It's very nice, I like it a lot.
<3 - Report As Spam
- Alondra o4 - 10/19/2008
- dats really nice i really like it
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- weirdisinsane - 10/19/2008
- great job. =)
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