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I Talk to You
I talk to you,
when I feel depressed.
I talk to you,
when I'm bored.
I talk to you,
when I need comfort.
I talk to you,
when I'm excited.
I talk to you,
because I won't have the chance to later.
- by ChEeRfUlDaRkNeSs |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: I Talk to You
- Artist: ChEeRfUlDaRkNeSs
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Description:
I did this a few nights ago, I like to write story's but i suck at writin poems.... =( If this 1 is BAD then say so! XD I wont mind, cuz my brother alredy criticized me...T^T But IM DOIN MY BEST!
I love to talk to people, so i hate bein lonely and bored...Im the kind of person who wants to have fun!~ - Date: 10/18/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- KayleeGrace123 - 10/21/2008
- well its good but its kinda plain and pointless but if you work at it im sure you will get good we all believe in you 3/5
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- irishdrunkninja - 10/18/2008
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one question because of the last sentence...
are you suicidle??
that's not good...
dude like.. try something happier or something about how beautiful something/someone is or a love story...
that just made me feel bad. - Report As Spam
- morad159951 - 10/18/2008
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u know its good so deal with it
i mean like i DO know who ur poems are about
so dont be afraid to add more cuz i know how u feel about him
smile - Report As Spam
- ChEeRfUlDaRkNeSs - 10/18/2008
- well, for me its hard to write poems... smile Im really bad at drawing too XD
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- Zitenshi - 10/18/2008
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^^ love it razz well... im saying my opinion, but i can't see it like a poem sweatdrop but still i like it... i talk to my friends by the same reason smile i hate to be lonley or people to ignor me. don't worry, my sister says i suck drawing.
5 stars biggrin - Report As Spam
- Ice Shadow Dragon - 10/18/2008
- 1st comment! this is a phailure
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