More Beast than Man

• Artist: The Vampyre Dylan
• Description: Another poem I related to the Anne Rice boothis one more of a relation to Louis, Lestat, and/or Marius.
• Date: 10/21/2008
• Tags: vampire emotion dark death cool

I wish I was human
I wish I was more than an imitation
I wish I was more human, than human
but that’s beyond my limitation
I'm a monster in human flesh

I've come for your soul
nothing you can do
nothing you can say

I'll kill you anyway

I drink your soul
just before I break your skull

I steal your life
Just before I kill your wife

I'll kill you in your dreams
Just before you scream

I'm a pinnacle of perfection
beyond all human perception
I make an art of desecration
beyond all human expectation
I complete my works with lacerations

I walk through the dead of night
None can face my might
Your blood, my sacred right
No one can put up a fight
My iron grip’s to tight

I feel beyond all human feeling
I feel alone in this flawed perfection
No one but me…
In all eternity

Comments

[WaitingForGreen]

When I say horrible description I don't mean that the description is horrible, but that the kind of monster he is is horrible according to the description.

[WaitingForGreen]

It's good, but you should draw it back in the end to his wish to be human. Since you start with the wish to be man, and then go into horrible description of what kind of monster they are, you should then draw back to how they wish they were human instead.