you were there

• Artist: alfonsos-angel
• Description: confort
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: were there

You were there when I was weak
you were there when I couldn't speak
you were there when I needed some one to be
you were there to comfort me
you there to visit me when no one else would be

Because you were there my life has positivly changed
I've learned from my mistakes in life
since you were there when none else was
my life is different
my heart mind and soul is softer because you cared
Forever I will have the love to share

Comments

[moxmo55]

I didn't like it because most of it is from a celine dion song called because you loved me, or is very similar to it. So very unoriginal. If you don't know of that song, that just sucks for you.

[Toxic_Pinup_]

i like it it was well written and very cute, 5/5.
if you wouldent mind could you look at my poems?

[Hellena Doll]

That is a really cool poem, it's very positive which is hard to find in this arena sometimes. good job!

[Natalia_Simo]

really cute

[Chizu_15]

Awww, it makes me want to cry because it was good.