The road to freedom

• Artist: pinconojo
• Description: it's a cross of lyrics and poetry. vote it and comen. it is my first pice like this that anyone has ever seen. so please don't be to harsh
• Date: 10/24/2008
• Tags: road freedom

The road to freedom is covered in blood.
Blood of men, women, and even children
a battle weary solder marches to the front yet again Brothers and sisters of the fitting forces gather round as he prays a silent prayer
Then out of nowhere a bomb shell comes flying…..
After the dust settled there was only carnage….


A solders family sits at home crying
The friends and family have come and gone
Now they only have each other



How will they deal with it?
You guess.
And how would you deal with it?

Comments

[OMG You Killed Kenny1596]

great poem, i like it! 5/5

[Earthriseii]

A good first piece, the flow is not particullary smooth which makes it a little hard to read, and the questioning at the end feels out of place in the way that has been worded. However a lot of potential I look forward to seeing you progress.

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

EWW and AWWW!!!!!!!!! IT'S FLIGGIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep me posted on other ones you made jo buddy 'ol pall:3 smile XD XO XP