Blinding Shadows

• Artist: xxkychan
• Description: Meaning:
  Light- life and reality
  Dark- mind and dream
  Your mind creates the impossible.
  
  I LOVE critics! I want to improve as much as possible.
• Date: 10/26/2008
• Tags: blinding shadows

I hide behind the sun's light and shadow reflecting off black walls
Mind in a trance, spinning fast, then falls.

Blinding light and dark merge to shift my thoughts to dreams
Shattered light breaks; it twists and gleams

Reality and myth form to shape them to seep through
Shifting shadows behind the black light pursue

Hiding, waiting, fear of dark light
Thoughts start to throb; harder they fight.

My mind is the shadow that forms shifting fears
The dreaded unknown never appears.

Comments

[Forever_Fool]

one word-

w o w.

[iiWaCKyO_o]

oooo.... i like it .... 5/5

[RAlNBOW SKITZ]

i think it is just fine!!! but... the word suns needs one of these... ' like this-- sun's.
it is beautifully made!!! i like the metaforic usage of darkness and light!