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Aah, how I love the moonlight
It looks so pretty in the night
The stars look so very high
In this beautiful jet-black sky
Even though this moon is so pretty
It's a cruel thing that makes me so thirsty
Why is blood the thing I must drink
Ah, I'm so thirsty I can't even think
I need to feed but see no one
I look again, there is someone
She's a kid with long blonde hair
She's very small, her skin is fair
I look into her eyes, they're full of exhaust
She's coming to me, but she seems lost
I can't hold myself, I'm losing control
Now that she's in my arms, she'll lose her soul...
- by babygurl2795 |
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- | Submitted on 10/28/2008 |
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- Title: Red Moon...
- Artist: babygurl2795
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Description:
I know this isn't a very good poem but I am very bored and thought that I should just try and put a poem here... if people like it I might put some more... hopefully you'll rate nicely ^^
oh and I'm sorry if I made a couple mistakes in my spelling!!! - Date: 10/28/2008
- Tags: moon
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Comments (5 Comments)
- kitkatkitty11 - 11/02/2008
- Zumi never told me abot this... but I read it before anyways! Its really good! 5/5!
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- babygurl2795 - 10/28/2008
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Omg! thanks Kinezumi! tell Usagi to come and read it so I can know what she thinks about it!!^^
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- DiexToxSurvive - 10/28/2008
- oh my gerard. ur really good at writting poems neko!
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- babygurl2795 - 10/28/2008
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I'm pretty sure I'm not as good as you say but thank you!! ^^
¬Nyaa!! ;3 whee - Report As Spam
- Shad0w Cloud - 10/28/2008
- It's actually VERY good. I've been writing since I was 12 (I'm 14) and I don't think I'm this good. Keep it up ^-^
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