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No one is trying,
To get along with me,
No one is trying,
To see what I see.
No one will know,
who i can be,
if they don't try,
To get to know me.
How can I go,
Along with my life,
If when everytime i look,
I see you with a knife.
The backstabs,
and betrayel,
The heartbreak and denial,
Chill with me,
Don't hurt me,
don't desert me,
Keep my heart STRONG,
Don't make right,
wrong.
- by ChrissyBabee32114 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/31/2008 |
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- Title: Try.
- Artist: ChrissyBabee32114
- Description: It's alright i gues....
- Date: 10/31/2008
- Tags: trying chrissy
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Comments (6 Comments)
- guess beaniewatson - 01/01/2009
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i really like it!
anyone that says other, are just plain idiots!
i get what ur trying to say, i feel the same way, just thought i'd let u know ur not alone... sometimes it's nice to hear smile - Report As Spam
- Collector Chris - 11/01/2008
- an ok poem but emoticons you used a little too much
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- -xXCookie_TaserXx- - 11/01/2008
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dont listen to Farrelei
hes just stupid - Report As Spam
- Fai1ureat1ife - 11/01/2008
- Nice! good emotion in the poem.
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- Farrelei - 10/31/2008
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Ookay...
Maybe next time don't use emoticons, as this is suuposed to be writing arenas not emoticon arenas <.< - Report As Spam
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