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To live long
One must be heard
But,
Nobody hears me
Nobody hears my cries
Nobody hears my life
Being
Slowly
Blown out...
Like a candle in the wind.
- by Goddess of Glomps |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: candle in the wind
- Artist: Goddess of Glomps
- Description: I personally liked it and a friend of mine told me to enter it in the writing arena. so, here I am!
- Date: 11/03/2008
- Tags: candle wind
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Comments (4 Comments)
- StrawberryMangoIceCream - 11/09/2008
- All i can say is:wow.That is an awesome idea,and you can picture yourself,slowly growing weaker,colder,fading to black,wow.
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- Risu-chan72217 - 11/06/2008
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I think it has potential.
I think it would be better if the candle should slowly burn it self out or "exhaust" it self in pleading to be heard in its last flicker. Probably give it more depth in a way. - Report As Spam
- Darkfire Dragonmaster - 11/06/2008
- Somehow I always seem to be drawn to somber/melancholy poetry ^_^
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- Maryjustianna - 11/03/2008
- sad....reminds me of me lol! but i like it.5/5
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