I'll Never Forget

• Artist: Dracul Castleman
• Description: my friend helped me and my baby XxComplicatedxLoverxX meet, once we did we started falling for eachother. this is a poem thing i made for her, i love u baby! ^-^
  
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: never forget

I'll never forget that day,
that i met you and my breath gave way,
i was so happy my heart keep thumping,
"is this love?" i asked myself.
for the days grew that when i couldn't talk to u i grew sad,
but as the day you said u liked me i was nerveous,
i found i loved you too and asked be mine,
i smiled when you said "yes." my heart never giveing a rest,
for now i am happy and smileing with glee,
for i will never forget the day i met you.

Comments

[NebuChi3]

@ tksunshine93:
Ditto!
. . .but I didn't get anything after the comma.__.

[LonelyMemory]

i loved it
it sounded so fulfilling !
^_^
you're very great with writing! ^_^

[tksunshine93]

i like it it's very cute and well written in my opinion
and Diana_is_so_Emo? not all poetry has to rhyme, there is no one way to write

[Klackerhausen]

Aww.... That's so nice of you Ali!! I love helping out my friends like that.

[Dracul Castleman]

this isnt ment to totally be a poem, i made it just to show my love for her so if it doesnt rhyme does it really matter?

[Savory Cinnamon]

biggrin hello
and i am the 'my friend' that gots them together >3

[Diana_is_so_Emo]

its ok.. i rated it a 2.. u need more and some doesnt even rhyme im not critisizing u but i think its horrible it took you five sentences to make some word rhyme