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I climbed to the
Top of a very high
Building and stared
Down at the world
It was mine to hold
From where I sat atop my throne many
Miles above them I reached out
To grasp the sky, falling for-
Ward I remembered
I can’t
Fly
- by Seiryo-san |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/10/2008 |
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- Title: Going Down
- Artist: Seiryo-san
- Description: A Concrete poem I had to write for my english class
- Date: 11/10/2008
- Tags: going down
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hyrule_Ninja 45 - 02/15/2009
- Awesome....rockin....great poem! 5/5!
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- akemi_chan48 - 11/18/2008
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I really love the formatting of your words...the arrow is pretty kool
but i don't think that the phrasing works well with it...i still like ur poem though! ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Wizeria - 11/11/2008
- Awesome poem~!
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