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Dollie's broken. Watch, she's weeping.
Here the darkness comes-a-creeping.
Full of sorrow, tears are streaming
down a face that's meant for beaming.
Dollie's broken. Help, she's bleeding.
Here the darkness comes-a-creeping.
Full of hurt, her blood is seething.
Too much pain, she just stopped breathing.
Dollie's broken. Hush, she's sleeping.
Here the darkness comes-a-creeping.
Eyes drift shut, her heart stops beating.
I wonder if and what she's dreaming.
- by He Who Lurks |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: Poor Dollie
- Artist: He Who Lurks
- Description: I had originally written this in a very different tone, with very different lyrics. Then I just had an urge to remake it, because I wasn't very satisfied with the original piece. This rendition feels much better to me, and it's honestly something I'm proud to say that I wrote.
- Date: 11/20/2008
- Tags: dollie broken suicide depression angst
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Comments (5 Comments)
- November blues - 11/22/2008
- nice have you thought of something really good and you rightly should be proud of it.
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- kawaiikutiie - 11/22/2008
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im going to get night mares now D;
jokes... i luff ett ! - Report As Spam
- PunkCupcakez - 11/21/2008
- i like it its very visual
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- Fairest93 - 11/21/2008
- that is good!!! nuff said!!
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- Black Sheep of Death - 11/20/2008
- Nice. Very nice. I like the rhythm and repetition that makes this sound like it should be some kind of creepy nursery rhyme.
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