The battle of life

• Artist: boy in the box
• Description: I'm not much of a writer but tell me what you think of this little... poem I guess you could call it.
• Date: 11/22/2008
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Time erases all. Life and death. Though try as we might it cannot and will not be stopped. All that will be left afterward shall be but mere memories and even those too will fade into the oblivion of times constant wave. But even though we may be overlooked and forgotten we must press on in the battle of life for whether we are remembered or not; it is what we did with what small amount of time we have been given that ourselves and others will be looking back on for comfort and joy when life is at its most bleak and unforgiving points.
- a poem by a boy

Comments

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

nice, i like this one to ^^ thnxs for the ratings

[Elisabelle]

Dude... you'll probably grow up and people will be like, using your words in emotional movies and stuff. You need to get that stuff copyrighted right now. Like... seriously. You'd get rich really fast. You could put this in that book of poems by teens. It's really cool.

[boy in the box]

Thanks for the compliments.

[run_away_babe]

i liked it a lot.
5star....

[Arotyk Sykotik]

i think your poem is really great...that my opinion anyway, you should keep writing if not already smile