Admittance

• Artist: cue the catchy piano
• Description: rate and comment please? sort of an over dramatized version of something that happened to me. but that's what i do, i over dramatize things and write poems about them...:]?
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: admittance

Yeah I guess I hurt you
But you hurt me too
As much as I can never admit it
So I've already owned up to what I put to s**t
And now I think it's your turn
My friends told me something was off about you, but I guess I never learn
I had faith in someone who let me down
I accepted smiles from someone who would only make me frown
I suppose that was stupid, but even after the end
I think back at things you said and feel like maybe I wasn't just a trend?
Though evidence serves otherwise, and I'll never truly know,
Did you ever truly love me, or was it just for show?

Comments

[the_toxic_shockartist]

it's good but i feel like there's a feeling of i dunno turing frown's upside doewn sort of childish sorry mabe im sycho i dunno but it's good on a different level than how i write (not that I'm better than you just different) it's good you get a B from me

[cue the catchy piano]

Thanks for any commentage!

[DarkBlaze911]

goood goood